They have use a large amount of text when creating this double page spread. i would use less text that this and make the images bigger or only have one large picture. I like the way that they have put one image in black and white to make the other image stand out, so you can see who the picture is of. I think that the heading for this article is too small and it do not stand out so yo can see easily what the article is on. I would make the heading bigger so it covers the very top of the double page. They should have a main paragraph at the start of the article so it is a brief introduction into the main text, and they can easy decide if they what to carry on reading.
The areas that I would use for this magazine are
- i may use the two images one in black and white and one colour to make them stand out.
- the text on the left so if explains the image
- Page numbers
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